8 August 2014

day moon


day moon

the jellyfish we spot

from the end of the pier
 

2 comments:

  1. I like this haiku very much, Mark!

    (I'd "like" it if I could, but it seems there's no like button...)

    --Bill Waters (@Bill312)

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  2. Thank you, Bill.
    I've tried several versions of this one. All the elements are just as they were on the day but I haven't found an elegant way to convey that the jellyfish wasn't just drifting, it was actively swimming which is something I'd never seen before.
    Prompted by your parentheses, I dug into the settings to see if I can find a "like" button of some sort. Might be a good idea, I'll see if this works out!
    Mark

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