4 June 2014

this life


this life

the shooting star

i missed


revised from 110911

1 comment:

  1. Always great to come back. Welcoming, affirming, warming, chilling at times too.

    I could happily read your revisions forever, and anything else you care to share.

    Love this one. Carefully crafted of course, but I imagine too changing that middle line - the endless list of the missed.

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