haiku and not-haiku from Mark Holloway @forgottenworks
Mark,This is a fine poem. Just a thought: omit 'leaf' and what's left, a poem with differing meanings. Thank you.....pajamas
Pajamas! Delighted that you could drop by, and thanks for your suggestion. Yes, due to my (probably wildly mistaken) view that I shouldn't be "making stuff up", I just noted what I saw and didn't take it that extra step. I'll try it out.