15 March 2014

fog


what's left of the fog      leaf skeletons

 

2 comments:

  1. Mark,

    This is a fine poem. Just a thought: omit 'leaf' and what's left, a poem with differing meanings. Thank you.....pajamas

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  2. Pajamas! Delighted that you could drop by, and thanks for your suggestion. Yes, due to my (probably wildly mistaken) view that I shouldn't be "making stuff up", I just noted what I saw and didn't take it that extra step. I'll try it out.

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