29 August 2013

well . . . ?

 
Well, what did your sixteen-year-old self think Life had in store for you?

      what 
might have been

written in the stars

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      by clouds

   

2 comments:

  1. I'm wondering much the same myself, but not so poetically. Thanks.

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  2. Ahh, great on the brevity! I've been rather absent as of late with work, but wondered what you'd been up to. Glad to see you've been tinkering more with with tiny haibun.

    The use of spacing and use L works well here.

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