haiku and not-haiku from Mark Holloway @forgottenworks
I like this. It feels like a song lyric or a bit of a larger story. It gets me wondering, but leaves me satisfied with itself as well.
how I used to be as well, well done
thanks, Jem thanks, DaveI never know how much - if at all - to explain. Either about the ku or myself.Think I'll just say that I particularly like it when things are both literal and metaphorical at the same time. Yup, that should do it.