19 July 2012

three white moths


 
three white moths in the lawn grass my words that weigh as much


 

2 comments:

  1. I like the way this line can be subverted, by the reader, or the writer? :-)

    three white moths...grass my words that weigh as much

    That word 'grass' is more than green stuff. Neat verse.

    Alan

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  2. Thank you, Alan, and for all your comments. Greatly appreciated.

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