8 February 2012

slow thaw

slow thaw     the sunlit drip of birdsong     in this melting world



  1. One thing I relish when visiting your blog is the attention you pay to layout and line spacing - I could learn a lot from you. (I've downloaded your PDF to peruse at leisure / pleasure - thanks for sharing).

  2. Thank you Jem!
    Yes, in my writing I do fret about such things - more than is probably healthy.
    Also with the blog itself - the templates allow you to make ten thousand changes, but still don't let you get it quite the way you want! Very frustrating.
    I do hope you enjoy the PDF. It's the best I could do. I'm at that "difficult second album" stage now!

  3. soem lovely poems here, Mark. I think this one is my favourite of the recent crop.