4 November 2011

november rain

 
november rain     a  child's swing sways      the weight of wet leaves

   

5 comments:

  1. (I cleared A LOT of leaves in the rain that morning.)
    Thanks for stopping by! -M

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  2. love the way the words work in this

    swing sways weight wet

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  3. Excellent. I love the tone, it captures the moment. And it has that mix of sensory input that I love in the classic stuff by Basho and Issa. The movement with the weight and the wet texture of the leaves. Great stuff.

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  4. Yes, specifically, I suppose, it was an infant's swing with one of those deeper bucket-style plastic seats which had itself caught quite a hoard of falling leaves.

    Thank you Dave

    Thank you Neil

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