haiku and not-haiku from Mark Holloway @forgottenworks
I feel that weight - dank and drab!
(I cleared A LOT of leaves in the rain that morning.) Thanks for stopping by! -M
love the way the words work in thisswing sways weight wet
Excellent. I love the tone, it captures the moment. And it has that mix of sensory input that I love in the classic stuff by Basho and Issa. The movement with the weight and the wet texture of the leaves. Great stuff.
Yes, specifically, I suppose, it was an infant's swing with one of those deeper bucket-style plastic seats which had itself caught quite a hoard of falling leaves. Thank you DaveThank you Neil