25 October 2011

undulating cloud

 
undulating cloud an acorn in the squirrel's pause

 

4 comments:

  1. Your writing gives me a place to breathe and feel. Thank you for what you are doing.

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  2. A wonderful comment, a real boost at a time when my energy has dipped and my momentum faltered. Thank you so much. -M

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  3. I loved the play on the squirrel's 'pause' and paws. Even if not intended it worked for me!

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  4. Thank you Jem.
    Watching a grey squirrel undulate across the lawn on its way to dig an acorn into the moss. Sure that such blatant wordplay would normally be frowned upon in haiku but, feeling that the word could justifiably do double work, I decided to risk it. So, yes, pun intended. Or optional. -M

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