7 July 2010


at his deathbed
the TV still on
- just softly -
a show
he always loathed


(Longer comments and discussion prompted by this poem can be found on pages at Gogyohka Junction, here)

3 comments:

  1. Wow - this one has real power. Brilliant work.

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  2. I don't think you need to worry about this one appearing flippant - for me the combination of images shows a deep respect and love. A really powerful poem.

    (just read the comments over at Gogyohka Junction)

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  3. Dick,
    Thank you so much for saying,
    very much appreciate it.

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