15 May 2010


slow morning
even the dandelion clocks
have stopped


3 comments:

  1. I read this several times, Mark. It is beautiful in its simplicity yet so profound in statement.

    You know when you read a piece of poetry and wish you had written it? I felt that way when I read this.

    Thanks for sharing this.

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  2. Thank you so much.
    At first I thought it might be too simple, so
    I fretted away at it for a while, trying to change it or add to it, but got the feeling it just wanted to be left as it was.
    So I did.

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  3. I can only echo what Paul said. I think it's wonderful. :-)

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