haiku and not-haiku from Mark Holloway @forgottenworks
I read this several times, Mark. It is beautiful in its simplicity yet so profound in statement.You know when you read a piece of poetry and wish you had written it? I felt that way when I read this. Thanks for sharing this.
Thank you so much.At first I thought it might be too simple, soI fretted away at it for a while, trying to change it or add to it, but got the feeling it just wanted to be left as it was.So I did.
I can only echo what Paul said. I think it's wonderful. :-)