21 March 2010


sun glint
(the t) ing of [f] her bicycle bell
first day of spring


5 comments:

  1. brilliant and inventive - I like all three versions.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Ah, I didn't realise you could comment. I stumbled on this place by accident, and was moved to write the following tribute:

    Saw your syllables shine/in fine haikus/thank you for site/and sounds

    Sorry for poor verse. But summer sea glass in your pocket...mmmm. Thanks, really.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Dave, Grant,
    You really cheered me up there, many thanks!

    And Anonymous too,
    Delighted you could visit, appreciating your encouraging words.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Gorgeous simplicity that activates the senses and sweet remembrance. Surely, forget me nots.

    ReplyDelete