haiku and not-haiku from Mark Holloway @forgottenworks
I wonder if just the second line would suffice. It seems very complete in itself?
I also like the "pale blue breeze" - for me it evokes an image of a clear day ahead.
yes, the illusion of rain falling from a blue sky.(also, i did worry about breeze and trees because i so rarely rhyme, but it seemed to work on this occasion.)