19 March 2009


the old tortoise
has seen many a Spring -
no two the same


2 comments:

  1. I knew I liked your haiku a lot, but you didn't know I like tortoises, so now you can know how much I like this haiku :) It's made my day.

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  2. I like this version best. It has a great feel to it - the wonder of passing time.

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